My dog

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  • 29 juli 2008
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Hi, i am ..........
I give a talk about my pet. My pet is a dog. It is a great dog, a leonberger. His name is Maks. He is very sweet. It is a man. We have the dog for four years. He looks great; big and fat. But he isn’t fat when he has been in the water then he is very skinny. He has a big head. And a great tongue. He eats a lot of his food. But recently he was ill. In that time he ate nothing. And he was very slow. A few years ago my mother was letting him out and then he went swimming and then he couldn’t come out of the water... It was very sad... My mother jumped into the pool and helped him out. He was very happy when he was out.
He is now almost four (4) years old. The people where we have him from... Think that he can become seven (7) years old... I think that he can grow older. As I walk him and there comes any other dog, then he is very strong... He would fight with them when it is a male. When it is girl then he wants to play or other things. When he was a puppy he wanted to play with everybody en everything. It was very cute, he has a lot of his dog- friends. He plays a lot with them. When my dad went running with him, my dad was almost home en Maks was on the field with the other dogs. Then my dad must go search him. He plays a lot...

When we do not want him to go playing he has to cry a bid... It was sad... As we now come home than he tells us all what he has seen and done... He say wowowowhoho... I find that very cute.

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S.

S.

beetje kort denk ik,
en de grammar is ook niet helemaal top.
ook je zin opbouw is appart en je kunt dingen beter opsommen denk ik ;)
voor de rest goewd hoor!
groetjes......

12 jaar geleden

L.

L.

dankje wel ik gaa dezelfde spreekbeurt doen aar ik gaa iets meer woorden invullen maar echt bedankt

11 jaar geleden

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