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Main points: The band Hear Say has stalkers. Myleene Klass got one. The band has a new single: pure and simple. It has got a record of sales. The TV helps to make a fan club about a band.
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Main points: Hear Say is the fastest band risen to the top, even the Spice Girls couldn’t tip on it. They received a Grammy Award in 1990. They are sponsored by a group of industry veterans. Ray Hedges is the songwriter and Joice is the stylist.
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Main points: Berry Gordy is the founder of Motown Records and member of The Supremes. The Temptations are highly televised ways of creating a popgroup. Werner says that no other popgroup has so quickly inspired his own product.
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Main points: Three years ago the group introduced kiss non-alcoholic wine. All the bottles are collectors’ items. They also introduced a kiss Visa banking card. Sarah Rhodes says that the creation of the Hear Say dolls is an ongoing project. She is the manager. Everything had to been done very fast.
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