Article: Mixed Message
Source: Wasp
Time: 1.00
Subject: Magazine for multiracial people
Summary: Paragraph 1, 37 lines
Main points: Kelly is half Korean and half white, so he is a mixed-race. He hasn’t got an identity. He created the magazine Marvin, but it didn’t sale. He created the magazine to give multiracial a feeling dignity. Paragraph 2, 45 lines
Main points: Cindy Haves has a Korean mother and an African father. She is Kelly’s assistant editor. Kelly doesn’t want money for his magazine. When he was young, he was scold out every day. He doesn’t want to do anything with money and solely. Paragraph 3, 33 lines
Main points: The concept of magazines is devoted for readers with ambiguous racial identities. The fifth Marvin was the last one, because they lost a lot of money. Marvin is a non-profit foundation for mixed-race people. Marvin needs more money. Paragraph 4, 25 lines
Main points: Kelly has described Margin’s lofty detective. Cindy Haves is President of the Asian-Pacific Islands, study organisation and vice-president of the black student organisation at a College.
I thought this article was clearly written, because the writer used paragraphs, sub-headings and not too difficult words.
The author’s opinion is not expressed, because he used only facts in this text.
Source: Wasp
Time: 1.00
Subject: Magazine for multiracial people
Summary: Paragraph 1, 37 lines
Main points: Kelly is half Korean and half white, so he is a mixed-race. He hasn’t got an identity. He created the magazine Marvin, but it didn’t sale. He created the magazine to give multiracial a feeling dignity. Paragraph 2, 45 lines
Main points: Cindy Haves has a Korean mother and an African father. She is Kelly’s assistant editor. Kelly doesn’t want money for his magazine. When he was young, he was scold out every day. He doesn’t want to do anything with money and solely. Paragraph 3, 33 lines
Main points: The concept of magazines is devoted for readers with ambiguous racial identities. The fifth Marvin was the last one, because they lost a lot of money. Marvin is a non-profit foundation for mixed-race people. Marvin needs more money. Paragraph 4, 25 lines
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